Creative Writing - 1st person narrative

We have been studying Antarctica. We listened to a story about Nanook, a huskey who 

was sent to Antarctica on expaition in 1901. We then wrote the next chapter of the 

story from Nanook's 'Point of View'

The journey of the vastness begins

As morning comes. I have now gained energy 

as we sleep well last night, The sky was full of stars

everyone was asleep however i notice something in the stars,

while i was singing. The amazing stars I found formed letter N,

i thought about it whether it was saying my name or whether the universe was 

telling me about North Antarctica but well find out, 

As i gained energy this morning 

We were told to go to Antarctica as we my friend's go so.